Would you all ever start reading a book that opened like this?

by admin on February 4, 2012

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{ 10 comments }

Mk:] February 4, 2012 at 4:00 pm

That sounds like a pretty good book!:]
Whats the name of it? Maybe I’ll check it out:]
OMG YOU WROTE THAT?
your one talented cookie:]]

I luv MJ February 4, 2012 at 4:30 pm

omg! what book is that?! i wanna read it!
it sounds very good
=]

Kait Grace ♥ February 4, 2012 at 4:50 pm

I like it :)
I wanna read the rest of it!

Jessica February 4, 2012 at 4:57 pm

I didnt see anything that needed changing, in fact i want to read more of the story it sounds very interesting

dancer15 February 4, 2012 at 5:16 pm

I would definitely read that! It sounds really interesting.

Nikki B February 4, 2012 at 5:40 pm

I would so read this book you got me hooked after shes called to the principals!
:}

very nice job.

jml February 4, 2012 at 6:36 pm

Sounds good! A few grammar mistakes here and there, but everything else was good! And the title is awesome, that in itself would draw me in.
:)

swell February 4, 2012 at 6:40 pm

That sounds like one heck of a book, at least I would read it!

catfra February 4, 2012 at 7:02 pm

could be a good story but instead of crackle and drop (sounds like a firework that’s not gone off) try falter and drop. I’m sorry Raine – where are his words mixed up? cutting off try haltingly. I stood up in my chair – I had visions of you actually standing on your chair – try ‘ I jumped out of my chair’.
Hope it all goes well for you!

Sarah February 4, 2012 at 7:28 pm

that so sad! it was propelling to read. umm one knit pickety thing like the sentence “No one goes to the main office for just anything; you’d have to have done something pretty bad to get called.” I heard two girls whisper to each other, growing silent as I passed them on my way out of the door.” it just seemed awkward, maybe if it was like ” i heard 2 girls whisper “No one goes to the main office for just anything; you’d have to have done something pretty bad to get called.” becoming silent as i passed them on my way out the door. I dont know, i just think it looks better. but very interesting!

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